91 Banana road
Fruit valley
0000
13.3.18Fruit valley
0000
Dear Mum and Dad,
There are beautiful colours all around me.
I can sniff up some fresh air flowing through my nose and some flowery perfume and deodorant.
I can always hear people talking where I am. There is a very yummy, milky taste in my mouth.
It is so good it is nearly my favourite thing to drink. I like that I will always feel the smooth
carpet under my bottom. The place I am in has a lot of books I can see and read,
like chapter books, picture books and even magazines!
There is a gigantic Elm tree outside the area I am in. I can see a goal post in my sight. It is as tall
as the classroom. I can also see a medium sized butterfly garden.
It is so good it is nearly my favourite thing to drink. I like that I will always feel the smooth
carpet under my bottom. The place I am in has a lot of books I can see and read,
like chapter books, picture books and even magazines!
There is a gigantic Elm tree outside the area I am in. I can see a goal post in my sight. It is as tall
as the classroom. I can also see a medium sized butterfly garden.
WHERE AM I?
From,
Kobe
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Reflection:
We have been learning to describe a setting by using our senses.I enjoyed describing the setting.
Something I found tricky was proofreading to myself.
Next time I will work on using a capital letter for the word, I.
1 comment:
You have used interesting adjectives to describe, Kobe!
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