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Reflection

I have been learning to write an explanation.  I know that I can use an explanation in my research.  Next I need to sequence my ideas when explaining.

I have also been learning to use all sorts of different sites for research and then put all the research together.

I got a lot better at understanding the point of research.

My next step is to research about challenging and complex things on all sorts of different websites and links.

Narrative Poem

When My Brother Started School

When my brother started school

He went to the pool.

He nearly drowned

But luckily he was safe and sound.

We went to town

to buy something brown.

He said he wanted a toy

I thought that would bring him joy.

We went to buy a home

but first we bought a gnome.

We went trick or treating for halloween

But instead we got a bean.

When we got home we went to bed

And in the morning we got fed.

After that we watched tv

After that my brother dropped my tea.

After we watched tv

we found a key that lead to the atlantic sea.

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My writing reflection

Today I discovered how to write my own personal Narrative Poem.

The part I think was the best was the last paragraph because  it is creative and has my brother's name.

I would like to add more creative ideas next time. 

Nonsense poem

BREAKING NEWS

Here is the news

Three old boring cardboard boxes

They all do not look anything like foxes.

They can all get soaking wet

Under these soaking nets.

Boxes can be shaped as cardboard foxes

But oxes will not be shaped as boxes.

Boxes old, boring boxes

They sneeze in the breeze.

In the breeze they fly

in the in the sky.

Boxes will not fight oxes

Because they do not move at all.

That was the news!

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My writing reflection

Today I found out that nonsense poems are not as easy as it looks because when I first started I found out that making rhymes were not so easy.

I have been learning to write a nonsense poem because our teacher showed my class a poem that was about nonsense.

My next step is to work on the rhymes because I struggled with them.

Mystery Letter

          

91 Banana road
Fruit valley
0000

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Dear Mum and Dad,                                                          

There are beautiful colours all around me.  

I can sniff up some fresh air flowing through my nose and some flowery perfume and deodorant.

I can always hear people talking where I am.  There is a very yummy, milky taste in my mouth.
It is so good it is nearly my favourite thing to drink. I like that I  will always feel the smooth
carpet under my bottom. The place I am in has a lot of books I can see and read,
like chapter books, picture books and even magazines!  
There is a gigantic Elm tree outside the area I am in.  I can see a goal post in my sight. It is as tall
as the classroom. I can also see a medium sized butterfly garden.

                                                 

WHERE AM I?

From,

Kobe

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Reflection:

We have been learning to describe a setting by using our senses.

I enjoyed describing the setting.

Something I found tricky was proofreading to myself.

Next time I will work on using a capital letter for the word, I.

Persuasive Writing

I was learning to write a persuasive piece of writing. I can think of lots of reasons why Ice-Cream is better than chocolate. It was easy to persuade the reader to think that Ice-Cream is better than chocolate because Ice-Cream is very yummy!

Acrostic Poems

I was learning to write an acrostic poem.

I can write an acrostic poem about Halloween.

It was easy to write an acrostic poem because there is lots of things we can say about the topic; Halloween.

Narrative Writing

I was learning to write a narrative. 


I can describe the characters and settings. 
It was easy because the picture prompts helped me to write my story.

Contractions

Learning how to make contraction's. I can make two longer words in to one shorter word. It was easy because the new word had parts of the two words in it.

Vowel Sounds

It was easy to tell the differrence between the vowel sounds beacause the video explained it well. I can tell the differrence between the long and short vowel sounds. I was learning about the short and long vowel sounds.

Using Different Punctuation In My Writing

Learning To Use Sequencing Words

Using Interesting Words In My Writing

I find it easy to think of interesting words but it is tricky to use them in my writing.

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